All Comments on 'The Outing of Claire LaPointe'

why repeat all of this as a separate story ?

Whenever I see a story that is a follow-on to an earlier story, I go back and re-read the original. It seemed to me that the Outing of Claire LaPointe was really the last 30% or so of the original story. This, so far as I can see, was just a cut and paste. Did Coaster2 just forget that this was already in his earlier story?

I did enjoy the story both the first and second times, but am taking off points for a lack of originality!

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I must agree that I dont see the point of cutting Foul Language in half and posting it as a seperate story. The first was very good by itself. It would seem better served to continue it and let us know what happened to the two.

Where I live, we have a Heartless Bitch that does this to Husbands, in every court

case.. No one can stand her, but they will not act against her.. (fcking wimps) So this story does the body good ,to read it.. Thanks

My apologies to the readers who rightly recognized this was the tag to a previously published story. My copy in my files did not include the Claire LaPointe tag and I assumed it had been left off. For that reason, I decided to make it a separated entity. I should have been more careful and checked the Literotica story. Shame on me.

Coaster

Hail Coaster2, who, when he discovered his error, actually admitted it! Now we know for certain that he is not a politician! LOL!

cold

The entire text of this story has been excerpted from "Foul Language." rates a zero for false pretenses.

I was reminded of the Bard's famous warning about lawyers...

Coaster2 realised his mistake in 2006. I just thought I'd remind him again.

A hat off to thee fine Sir.

"Gay" as in happy. ;)

To all of the nay Sayers, are you condoning the actions of a sexual preditor?

You need to write another ending.i

I didn't read "Foul Language" so I had no idea this was a repeat. But I liked the story, I liked the concept, and I know that there are other lawyers who could stand to be

"outed".

thats a hell of a bloody roundabout ahe.

yip been there, got the t shirt, felt like crap blaa blaa blaa

im aware of some of the crazeez out there.

its a bugga ahe

cheers.

one star for two reasons

One this is just a copy and paste job, and two you altered the history of the copy and paste job

Lazy sloppy work

Well done. Good story line. Keep writing.

XYZ

GEOF MATHESON WAS A STUPID DESPERATE CUNT FOR TAKING BACK HIS BITCH OF AN EX WIFE!!

As the ending of Foul Language??? Why???

Did the main character end up getting back with his wife and if so, where did they end up living???

What about their kids??? Did he make up with them???

You really need to put more effort into your endings. It seems as if you suddenly just get tired of writing and you quickly hobble an ending together but you always seem to leave a lot of loose ends and empty holes unaddressed.

What about all the divorces. Wive's got away with murder. Incomplete justice.