by boneams
Great start for your next story. Chapter two right around the corner?
I have enjoyed all the preceding stories with Dvorska but I don't like the direction this one is taking: Probably just me but not my cup of tea:-(
but you really, really need to learn how to use commas correctly.
Boneams, just read the story. I liked it. I love Kevin and Adam. They are so awesome. I am anxiously awaiting chapter 2. The concept of weres being the aggressors. I like it. Will keep checking for chapter 2. Voted 5 stars.
I wasn't sure I was reading the right story. Who starts a story w/ a Biblical quote? You do.....Jake Newton is a great surprise! He is so far behind when it comes to sharing who he is that it will be interesting to watch him open up w/the help of Kevin. You made no comment of how Kevin and the others spent Halloween or should I say the "Royalty" Kevin met on Halloween. And what happened to the author Jaz or her editor Miz T?....hehe-he....you know I had to ask......
Love the stet up for this continuation. More weres-good and bad, fallen angels and shackled angels-this is going to be an awesome ride. Glad Kevin will have a furry buddy to bond with.
Specifically means removing one out of every ten. It does NOT mean devastate or destroyed. It means only 10% losses. Bad but not horrific.
To decimate was a Roman military punishment for mutiny or desertion, killing one in ten of a unit, usually a cohort (about 480 men).
The troops would be chosen randomly, then the other nine would be ordered to kill them.
Was the word you meant since the terrorists planned to wipe out the human race.
Decimate has a specific meaning; why do so many misuse it?