All Comments on 'The Party Ch. 01'

I loved. Contintue!

For your first story, it is excellent. Can't wait for the next chapter

Well not everyone, but a lot of girls dreams. But not mine. I found myself liking the other guy Pedro better. He obviously likes her and probably respects her work without her being all fan girl all over him. Alessandro, well she is already in love with the idea if him, not the real him. He is good character, but I think with the self conciousness and the fact he showed interest in her after Pedro did doesn't bode well for their relationship. Or so I can hope ;-)

Amebede

Stick it back up your ass