All Comments on 'The Passion of Pastor Ferris'

by Desmond Ravenstone

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Craftsmanship

A very interesting story. You dissected a very complex subject through two people's dissimilar attitudes and made it work. I would have thought that an extra paragraph or two at the end would bring a better closure, but that is just me. You wrote it the way you wanted and I thank you for that. Good Job.

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