All Comments on 'The Pastor's Wife'

by Peter Duncan

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JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969over 16 years ago
well writen

Well writen story,Sorry don't like the content.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

wish there were more chapters. great story to fanasize about. love to see her get knocked up or go home with his creampie and have her husband to eat out her studs cum out of her filled cunt

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

Hope you continue this story. Would love to read more. Your writing is great. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Why is she a pastor's wife?

Why would you try to suggest that a 50 yr old woman would suddenly renounce her wedding vows, her husbands love and her love of God? Why make her a Christian at all, why not make her a two-bit hoochie mama? Because it seems taboo? Well, it's only taboo if her actions equal her faith. In other words, going to church and being a pastor's wife doesn't make her a Christian any more than going to McDonalds' makes you a hamburger. For her to be a Christian, she would need to have a conversation with God, spend time in prayer and feel guilt over her cheating. There was none of that. As a result, your story was as erotic as reading a story about cabinetry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Why not a pastors wife they're regular people too!

As I said Pastor's and their wives are people just like the rest of us and subject to the same temptations, desires or sins if you want to go biblical. I think the thought of immorality makes a story even hotter. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
W.T.F.

Well written but very unlikley unless she is a little deranged. Every thing she has belived in she has shit on. If she had some remorse for betraying herself than possibly but to just suddenly be a slut, not belivable.

zed0zed0over 16 years ago
I'm Surprised

Sure are a lot of anonymous bible thumper's out there for a porn site!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Content Can Destroy Talent

Here the writer chose to crudely screw-up a religious couples life to get a rise from the young teenagers and weirdo's.<P>

It just doesn't work regardless of why the reader is here. Arousal is dependant on numerous factors and comfort or understanding is paramount to the semi-normal person.<P>

A sanctimonious hook is just a crude effort to be less than low which it was. Sure they are human but not so much against the grain of normal human convention to risk this in that setting or at all.<P>

This was contrived and absurd as such it failed in many ways the intent here.<P>

Kind of a waste of talent in chosing the wrong characters. Perhaps a lesson.

z00timez00timeover 16 years ago
zed0

whats your problem. Does the reference to God or the Bible make you uncomfortable. Are you so one dementioned that you could not have religous faith and also get horny. Anyway, Ifigure that the pastor is a black man with a 10 inch cock

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Dear Agnostic FuckingChezzehead Asshole in Mo

Who cares what you like or don't but each viewpoint here including a writer who chose to do what he didn't have to is given voice.<P>

Your choice of language indicates your upbringing and education or perhaps your ex-wife taught you what yo momie didn't?<P>

Grow up cheezzie

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
SUPERB!!!

Superb says it all. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nut Cases Are Everywhere!

It really baffles me how someone can spend 15-20 minutes reading a piece of erotica and then pretend it was something they didn't approve of and were shocked by its contents. Give me (and the rest of the western world) a break!! Frankly, I thought it was a great story, fitting the "erotic" portion of Literotica self-righteous characters" give a great story a zero rating, making it impossible for it to ever earn a deserved Hot H! I would assume they don't read any of the anal, gay, bondage or incest sites ..... I don't read them because I don't enjoy them, but when you see the words "Pastor's Wife" in the caption, well get real. FORCE yourself NOT to read things you know you aren't going to like, Dummy! I loved this one and hope there will be more. I just wish those Puritians would stop reading stories that "make you feel soooooo bad," ..... you nut cases!! (Why would anyone continue to read something that would upset them?? Doesn't make a whole lot of sense, no matter how you cut it, does it?!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
How Do You Know You Won't Like It Without Reading?

<p>You throw the word "dummy" around like you aren't one, dear anonymous commenter. So how DOES one know if one likes a story or whether the literary content are worthy of this website if one doesn’t READ it? For my money, your comment is so asinine, it’s clear you’re one of the brain dead “writers” who put out wimp husband/slut wife stories all the time. LOL</p>

<p>Ron123XYZ@foreveranonymous.naturally</p>

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Comical

A great story some of the comments make comical reading,the international press is full of stories of the sexual adventures of all sorts of religeous persons,pastors wives included.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Bit Of a Girl

Bit of a girl this Pastors wife,but then so is our Vicars wife,and she is not slow in coming forward.The Vicar seems to be more interested in the choir boys than her;mad fool.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Oooh preachy moral reviewer

Great story. As for the moronic, pious and self righteous reviewer; if you don't like it don't read the stories in the first place. If you really believed your moral stance then you wouldn't be reading anything on this site anyway. No one really cares for your religious preaching.

Orion623Orion623over 16 years ago
Terrific Writing

Loved the line about stroking the only swelling he cared about, his ego. Great description of a tentative seduction in the making, both parties working on each other. Very enjoyable reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
WONDERRFUL

Great story, you got my cunt dripping.

Katie in NEW JERSEY

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
love young cock

When I was in my late 40's I let a 23 year old fuck me .I wanted to try a big cock and he was 81/2 inches long and very fat. . We fucked 4 times that day .We fucked in every position we could think of. THAT BOY COULD FUCK.We only fucked that one day. I would love to try him again but he moved to anotther state. I,m 61 now and havn't been fucked in 7 years but am ready for another hung boy Deb in Ohio

ramonbrookramonbrookalmost 11 years ago
I'm sorry Pete

Meant to give this story the highest score available (5) but fat fingered it on my mobile a d gave it a 4 instead

Love your stories!

SplitAcesSplitAcesover 8 years ago
You hateful motherfucker!

You must not have liked being told how bad you were when you were young. Instead of recognizing what a useless waste of space you are, you blamed everyone who cared enough about you to try to get you to be a better man. What a disappointment you must be to your family.

This story is a good example of how your mind works. Two despicable people find each other and commit adultery, but everyone else is to blame. You're so stupid, it should be a crime. It takes a lot of effort to get your head that far up your ass.

SouthernLevellerSouthernLevelleralmost 8 years ago
Chill, Split Aces!

It's a fantasy! It's not real! It's listed in the category of "loving wives" which is the adultery section in Literotica, so you knew what you were about to read. Don't complain to Peter Duncan for writing a type of story you didn't like. Simply read something else! (I don't like rape stories, so I don't read that category. I don't complain that a story in the category "Non-consent/Reluctance" is about rape!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Brain sex

Peter Duncan your description of the sex between Brad and Aggie is so good I felt like my sex organ (brain) got wet from Aggies squirting, Keep up the great work!,

ilimitadoilimitadoover 6 years ago
Really Good Story, Thanks!

Oh, shit I thought this was all...and now I see there is more!!!!

GOODIE

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
She Needed A Hook, Studly Came And She Shook, While Hubby Was Beating His Book

Very nice sex here. The part about the boy and his aunt got way too repetitive, though. And these pastor's wife stories are waaaayy better when she doesn't contrive to disrespect her husband and her marriage.

There's no reason to make the pastor a superficial jerk. Unless there were also some background on him, making him into a bible-beating eunuch would be tough to pull off believably. And why do it? There's a thousand times more bible beaters in the world than bible beating pastors.

Pastors tend to be very practical, down to earth people. All of this talk about sex and christianity is stupid stupid stupid. Pastor's love screwing their wives, so please don't perpetuate the christians-can't-fuck trope.

Anyway, she got what she needed and the sex was good. Bravo.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Happens More than you think

I did that in college

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great finish for

The soon to be ex-preachers wife. And the life of a 19 year old single father's child support payments

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Why bash only Christians in your shitty story? Why not write about the Iman's wife, or the Rabbi's wife? How about some diversity dickhead?

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77almost 3 years ago

Wonderful beginning! Sexual repression and a husband who only cares about his own pleasure would logically lead to this. I wish she could get pregnant, though. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Five is not enough to score this beautiful story. ++++

Marklynda2Marklynda2over 1 year ago

Fantastic story! I enjoyed it immensely, the interplay between them was very sweet and that they each wanted it so much but we're filled with trepidation. I definitely am looking forward to reading more. I admire your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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