All Comments on 'The Pearl Ch. 06'

Such a lovely scene - even reading it again I'm struck by how beautiful these two are together, and how magical their love is... You've really done a fantastic job with this tale! I'm so privileged to edit for you, milady. Keep up the excellent work!

You continue to create a great tale. You story involve old Chinese legends which are fun to read and at the same time I'm left with the feeling that I'm watching a new legend in the making. This chapter in particular fells like the stuff of legends. That Dakota accepted the "Dragon" before the man can only be the stuff of legends. Am I using the word "Legend" a lot. I'll be watching for the next chapter to see how this legend is coming along.

Your story continually entertains and enchants me. The characters continue to grow, as do the relationships between them, your writing style blends humor and touching moments together seamlessly, and they way you ground the character's reactions in reality makes it all the more believable.

I admit that I've been looking forward to the physical expression of love between Dakota and Sebastian for a while, and it did not disappoint; the tender but heated tone was excellent, and I think you handled the logistics of a dragon and a human quite well; the bit with the pearl was an inventive twist, too.

Also, this is unrelated to most of the story, but Abney Park for the win!

*ahem!* But, back to the matter at hand, thank you again for sharing this wonderful story with us, and I hope that life grants you the time and inclination to write more for us soon.

overall quite a sweet chapter after all the previous drama. Well done change of pace.

Great story.

Full of passion, yet attentive to details and logic. Excellent work.

...for a great story, and a just as great music tip. By now I've listened to "Airship Pirates" four or five times! There are too few really good dragon stories on this site, or dragon stories whatsoever.

Never heard of Abney Park - cool band.