All Comments on 'The Perfect Captive'

by Rhianon

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dreamcatcher7dreamcatcher7about 17 years ago
wow

this was really hot, i so loved it.

Thankyou

erotikoserotikosabout 17 years ago
Nicely written story--

Liked your story very much. A quite different plot twist with the female hostage holding sway over her captor. Good writing and character development--could almost visualize the struggle on the cabin floor. Nice job!

wanderinggipsywanderinggipsyabout 7 years ago
hot hot fire amidst all the snow and ice outside!! ;)

hey Rhianon:)

hot hot fire amidst all the ice!! ;) but do you intend to ever stop the blizzard that traps Rusty and Isis in the same Cabin for days?;)

the angle of both trying to keep each other warm to stay alive quite original!! :) and your making Isis the cool as a cucumber hostage very interesting too!! :) even the semi forced sex unsettled her just temporarily!! Cool !! :))

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