All Comments on 'The Perfect Couple'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
GREAT Story

WOW.....hope you will continue....

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
YESSSSSSSSSSSSS

Great story!!! I hope you are going to write more on this family !!!!!!!!!! Joan@ The Jersey Shore

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
It's a shame their first time had to be in a car

I would hope when they came home that she took him to her bed, and spent some quality time fucking him properly.It's a great story and I wanted the best for them when it was time for them to have sex.They seemed like real people to me when I read the story....Rich

oldwayneoldwayneover 15 years ago
Good stuff...but

I agree with that comment about their 1st time happening in a car. Still, it was a very good tale. Thanks for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good Story

Very GOOD story line. I have had sex in a car many times and even at 48 I still find it to be FUN. I have only had the pleasure of sex with my mom in my mind. Came close to intercourse with my sister and had I been as lucky as he to see my sister as he did I sure would be going for more of mom and hoping to get sis.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
loved it ...

great story ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
blew me away

great story, loved every minute of it ..

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great story

Hi Tommcgee !

I don't know how I missed this story before. I thought no-one would ever write anything near my suggestion...(deffe2019 from the forum).

Anyway...I really love it and I wished you would feel the inspiration to write more.

/Steve

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
More!

Im not sure are u going to write a follow up, but Id like to read more from this story. Thanks :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
they sure are the perfect couple!

This is a great story from a gifted and prolific author who's around 30 years old. The title Mr. McGee gives his story hits the nail on the head. A boy and his mother ARE the perfect couple. The love they share for each other is the deepest, most intimate love there is. The mother carried her darling baby boy in her belly for nine months, he was born from that wonderful hole between his mother's legs, her mommy-hole. The boy can't help thinking about that cozy hole he came out of and what he wants to plug it with, and it makes him hard. Now, like Michael, the boy's a grown young male, with a big stiff prick and a pair of loaded balls that can bring his beloved mother and her mommy-hole a world of joy. Both Michael and his mom know that a mother's cunt is the receptacle nature provides for all the rich warm semen in her boy's brimming balls. A boy pounding away at his own mother's coochie with his big fat hard on and giving his mommy a big twatful of his creamy sperm is a beautiful thing, and the grinning young motherfucker and his happy son-fucked mom know it!

great lovergreat loverover 11 years ago
I don't figure out the Perfect part.

Am I missing something?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
nice

THE SISTER HAS TO BE NEXT AND THE MOTHER HAS TO GET HER DAUGHTERS BOOTY CALL BOYFRIEND

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Why didn't Michael interrupt them? She just wanted them out of the house so she could get laid.

SynisterSynisterover 6 years ago
Please make this a Series

i liked this story so far. you really should add more parts to it and also included the sister into the mix.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great

Sure wish my mom would give in to her temptation and let me be her lover knowing I can please her better than she's ever been treated before

MfkndragonMfkndragonover 2 years ago

There was no build up to the sex at all it was like wham bam and done if you are going to write a fantasy sex story there needs to be a story line and a build up to the sex

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

next ch. son gets mother and sister pregnant.

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