All Comments on 'The Perfect Ending to a Bad Day'

Too fast, too short, no plot! Grammatical errors. A lot of potential, though. Don't jump right into sex.

And I wasn't going to waste my time, and then read the comment.

A lovely story of feminine on feminine love. Sensitively written, the writer puts the reader in a setting with the couple. May her readers enjoy the ride as I did!

NK - NY