All Comments on 'The Perfect Game'

Loved it can not wait to read the next 2 chapters

I know you stated at the beginning of the story that it would be slow. While I would have the tendency to agree with you, it was still a fantastic read!

As for the game itself, one of your reviewers said that you should market that game...... I concur! If not market, send me a copy of the cards as I've got a group of friends that would LOVE to play that game!

Anyways, here's to hoping that all is well with your little endeavor and that the fervor your game has created continues to rise!

I can understand why you made the hall of fame. Absolutely breathtaking

I'm a recent fan but you simply out did your self in this one. I thought CnS was great but this one takes the cake. When that game goes on the market please let me know I'd love to buy it!! I can't wait to read the next chapters! Great job!

I absolutely loved it! You've got me thinking of how I could get my friends to play this

The best thing I've read on here. Believeable and intelligently written. Left me horny as hell.

Even on a third read it works wonders. Would love to be in that game.

My husband used that word just yesterday to describe the way our friends' dog made onto his lap. Incremental gets my vote. (If my vote matters, I mean. 8-)

Your imagination and skilled narrative are amazing..

I definitely wanna play

Or you could all get naked jump in a pile and play "who do you trust"? !!!

I hereby request a continuance of this enthralling tale.

A favorite from someone today who had this on their list of faves. Made me miss my friend, so I read it again.

I'm asking very nicely - please write it :)

Made me cum.... a few times ;)

I have read many stories on this site and others. This story held my attention (and erection) for almost the entire tire I read it. Well written. Can I buy the game somewhere since I am sure by now someone has mass produced it.

Can I buy that game off you? Seriously. Make a copy for me for a couple of hundred??

I hardly ever finish stories over r pages but this one kept me the whole time, I am going to steal your game haha

Very nice.... Want a copy of the game.... Please... Yes write the story

I want a copy of that game for the wife and and friends

Debated long & hard with myself about the score for this story. 4 or 5? In the end, the sheer inventiveness of the game itself and the build up of tension and pacing during the first half of the story won out. Being nit-picky, for me the move from the big deal of showing naked flesh to acceptance that everyone could screw one another (with the exception of Cheryl's initial reluctance of Beth & Alex) was way too quick. The more believable the story, the more enjoyable for me.

The sex was also a bit too long winded and Denise went from not being able to take any more in her sore ass to seeking out Alex's cock with her a-hole moments later. Minor criticisms aside, it was a very enjoyable read and I'm looking forward to seeing how things develop in the next installments. Thanks for your hard work & sharing your imagination and invention with an appreciative audience.

Very very good story, nicely narrated. Continue feeding us with such interesting and

pleasure giving stories on different themes.

On Page 5, you have a typo (...Debbie helped her guide me to the bathroom...). I think you meant Denise.

Do you have a fully detailed write up of the game, altogether? Could you post one?

Love the story!

I would also love a copy of that game!

My wife and I loved your story. She loves how playful (no pun intended) your stories are. We wish we could purchase your game. Where is part 2?

Loved it! Best story ever!!!

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Oh how I wish I could play that game.

This was a truly great story that elicited some delicious memories and fantasies in me. I dated identical twin sisters for a few months in college, and though I never had sex with either of them, I did have some wicked fantasies. Maybe I'll write them down some time. Thanks for a 5-star story.

Oh please write the follow up, and include Beth's roommate at a later stage. I.E. she arrives looking for Beth but gets drawn into the game, and can't end it there.

Great story. Please write the follow-up.

Caught a few glitches -- a couple instances of "you're" when you meant "your" and one "Debbie" when I'm sure you meant "Denise". But in general, a tale developed and executed well, as usual!

Were can i buy the game at you can contact me at billymontgomery11@yahoo.com

There are a lot of people that can write something, but there’s are writers and there are story tellers, You Tex are a Story Teller!!

A nice story! Thank you!

Dave

This story is the best thing to come out of Texas.

What a great game, the gradual build was fantastic as clothes and inhibitions fell towards a mutual fuck fest

One of the best stories I have read, clever, subtle and raunchy. Well done!

All that staging and intros really made it.

Sexy. Just what I want from a Literotica story.

And well written and edited so few reading stops to ruin the story.

Well done!

Bill S.

My only critique is that a bit build up between Dave and Beth would've been good 🤗

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Mmmmm … so hot! I’m so juicy! Excuse me for a few before I read Chapter 2.

Mmmmm … so hot! I’m so juicy! Excuse me for a few before I read Chapter 2.

A frog will notice the change in water temperature and hop out. Fact. If you don't believe me then go and find out yourselves. I have never heard of the get 2 drinks in to women and they will become lesbian but maybe it's just true in America. People from other countries read lit, and with this story don't waste time with a game, pass the roofied drinks to the women!!. As the protagonist wants to screw the friend and the girlfriend's 18 year old sister, job done. The end becomes a bit of un English sex farce!! Totally hilarious. Tres Bien.!!

As a game? No.

Too many parts. Too randomly revealed.

Best game story with nice anticipation and build-up

Superb story, deftly paced and wonderfully described... so.... this is me asking nicely.... please write the rest?

I first read this story over a decade ago. I have read many Literotica stories since, and have forgotten most of them. This one I remembered by name. So I returned to read it again this week. It has aged very well. Is it the most realistic? No. Is it the most sympathetic to all participants? No. Is it the hottest? I think so. Why is it so hot? If I knew, I would be writing stories like this and sweeping all the competitions.

Believe that you need to take a class to learn all the rules of that game

One of the best game tales I’ve read since I began lurking before joining LR. Well done mate, and thanks.