All Comments on 'The Perfect Pussy Ch. 14'

You're definitely one of my favourite authors. I enjoy your style of writing. Thoroughly enjoyed this story.

I've loved this series and have been waiting to find out what happens. But did I miss a chapter or are you not going to elaborate on what went on with Max?

i've loved this series since it started, it's an absolutely fabulous story but i think im missing something cuz i would have liked to have known how max died and how he got keni. other than that it was really great keep up the good work.

you should of told how he got her and what happpened you jumped from one part to another

i expected this to happen when i submitted the final chapter, and i guess i should apologize to every one for not going into more detail about Max and just what happened. there was a reason for that. To be honest, i had a really hard time deciding how to do it, and when i tried to make it happen, it didn't.

so, i let harley and keni do the story themselves. Harley chose to speak first, because he wasn't there, and Keni doesn't want to remember. At least not now, that is not to say that the answers you might want to see won't be answered in a future story. It's just right now, the answers have to remain locked away in their memories.

i'm sorry if the ending seems jumped or incomplete, but for now, it is as it stands. Noreen and Waylon might be able to explain how he got to Keni, but as for Max's death, and what happened in the cabin near Tulsa, that will remain a part of Keni's past and must remain there.

hugs to all

darkstone57

fucked up. we don't even know what happened to max's captives

i loved it because you did leave out a bit you let us try to work it out in our head. how she was taken how she freed herself. i like that bout your story.

thank you for writing it and please write more.

I was following this story and enjoying every chapter. I was really looking forward to the details on how they would get Max, so I was surprised to see the way you wrapped up the story. I admit that I feel like part of the story is missing but I also understand why you wrote it like you did. Some imagination and a wide open mind is required to get the style you chose to close the story.

Keep up the great writing and I look forward to your other stories. You've definitely got the touch and your imagination and ability to paint the picture are a gift. Keep writing and allow us to keep enjoying your gift.

Thanks.

Wow !!! Amazing story :)

I love this story, but I feel like I'm missing something. From 13 to 14, it went from them eating dinner to the killer being dead and Keni in the hospital. Just curious if that's how it was written or if somethings missing. Thanks

This story deserves 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 stars.

such an awesome story and love the evolution of the characters without losing that lusty vibe.

Love your stories! Keep up the good work. 5* Thanks for your time and efforts.