by angelwithdirtyface
Nice first effort, good use of descriptive language. Scenario though is not very realistic
I really don't think the scene is realistic.. im not saying its bad, it just kind of made it a tad harder to believe...Nice colourful language though.
Nice story but what's up with the rape type ending?? Doesn't anyone ever just want to have a little chemistry before hand?? Just my own brain working.