All Comments on 'The Personal Trainer'

by angelwithdirtyface

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badfunbadfunalmost 10 years ago
Hot!!!!

We're like the flip side of the same coin! Awesome story!

Foxwood20Foxwood20almost 10 years ago
Nice

Nice first effort, good use of descriptive language. Scenario though is not very realistic

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
ummm..

I really don't think the scene is realistic.. im not saying its bad, it just kind of made it a tad harder to believe...Nice colourful language though.

LordFrostyLordFrostyabout 1 year ago

Nice story but what's up with the rape type ending?? Doesn't anyone ever just want to have a little chemistry before hand?? Just my own brain working.

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