All Comments on 'The Phillips Family Curse Ch. 02'

Man, I wish there was a story of domination loss. How cool would it be if the women thought they had the upper hand, but it turns out, the man was just a dormant sex machine and they bit off more than they can chew.

Stories are either femdom or the very few alpha male characters from the get go.

Growth. I want growth. Not growth into being a living dildo. Growth into being an alpha male, breaking the girls completely.

When every single female character in your erotic story, gives any readers not into femdom feelings of frustration and disgust instead of arousal, it's a good indication it belongs in D/s or non-consent category. LW would be a good choice too, since it has a sizeable audience for pathetic male protags, but he isn't married....

He is a spineless nobody. This had potential, but the execution failed miserably. From a potential coming out from society's norms, it became simply the females dominating a weak male (not a man). None of them gave him a 2nd glance until he filled out. Couch it anyway you want, their just a bunch of sluts who can't hold onto a man. He is just a weak submissive. Like I said, it had potential. But failed miserably. As soon as grandma mentioned how he hated his sister, but would be her willing slave (Essentially) you lost me. Won't waste my time any further.

Grandma shouldn't have been the first. The boy should have shown at least a bit more resistance for a day before breaking in.

All of that detail with the grandma and the short description of everyone else. Why???

The first was his grandma? Don't care if she was supposed to be hot. She shouldn't have been first

More non-consensual/reluctant than any other category. The description of him fucking Grandma could have been cut to one paragraph… that’s just yuck. If he’s going to end up with a bitchy harem, he needs to take control, but he has no spine.

Jesse finally let his inner self out. He matured emotionally. mentally and psychologically. He became self-aware and finally accepted his inner desires and needs as opposed to expected norms. He honestly compared what was expected, e.g. his girlfriend, her borning/normal beariung, his reluctant/boring sex life anf finally his routine existence with what could be without self-imposed limits. Finally, if he is truly as good sexually as the women let on and as mature as he appears, he should soon be master of his lnew life and the women, to include the grandmother, the slaves.

I got to about page four... then the never ending talking in circles, and the spineless Main Character, got to me. I mean, seriously... first he complains about it for two days, instead of just leaving, then he gets overpowered by them.

I'm not advocating violence agains women. But I think facing the danger of being raped is a damn good reason to hand out a few bitch-slaps to get out of there! Simple as that.

I don't get why he didn't eventually take command. He should be the master, not the slave.

I don't know how far I made it last time but i got to page 3 of chapter two before I quit this time. I abhor violence against women, but ALL I could scream at the screen was "BITCH slap the BITCH you Pussy!!!!"

If he cut as well as the story says why didn't he just slap his grandmother in the face or some other physical thing to stop if from happening.No balls.

That boy was such a super wimp

You have been, and always shall be, insane.

UNFUCKIN"BELIEVABLE!!…..sooo detailed on the sex, from kissing (..which I LOVE...) to pussy and ass to EVERYTHING!

the plot is good but my GOD can Jesse be anymore of a pathetic loser. to get raped and brainwashed by his (despite what the Author says) at least mid sixties grandma. He should have swan dived out the window making sure to land head first. This is some garbage I'm really disappointed the believability of this story left about page 3 of the first chapter and never looked back. I mean MOM is mid 40 and grandma is mid 50 so she had his mom around 10 really not to mention all the other kids grandma had.

I can't believe that it started good in the first chapter, but it ended poorly.. But I gave the 2nd chapter a try, few minutes into it, and I don't think I could continue.. This crap is only for beta males.. No sane alpha men can enjoy craps like this.. I'm not here for stroke stories, I'm here for a good reading to waste some time, but this shit boils my head completely.

Ch1. Was a really good build up. Then the start of Ch2 was continuing in the same vain. Until you turned what you call a stud several times, even asked him to take his rightful place as the head of the family into a cuckboy slave. Rubbish what we're you thinking I can only guess that you weren't.

He may have been inexperienced--to turn him into a puss with the size that he is--by his grandmother--it was a great story till it got to that part of the story. I know the other pats have come and gone to see a character like that being belitled--now if he was a frail person I can understand that

It all went to shit

The beginning of the story got me hooked up, it is always just the end of it that is a bit ruined. Just like "You couldn't handle me", it is always about defeat and failure.

Shallow12

*****

5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Well done 😊 it is great but just like other people said Jesse should have been top dog in this family

You write the dialogue (dirty talk) so fucking well... While I don't particularly fantasize about your fetish, you certainly know how to describe studs and sexy bitches fucking hotly.

You take 15 pages to get him there and three pages to fuck all of them? What, were you in a hurry? Get your shit together and make him the man of this fucking clan and you could easily have one of the best stories on this site!!!!

Great job!!!!!

I would have been a lot more into it if Jesse was the dominant one all the way through.

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I liked the first chapter but this chapter is messed up. I don't like how the grandmother forced him to say that he would break up with his girlfriend. He is supposed to be a big strong dude. Why the hell didn't you make him just fuck her after she stopped and try to brain wash him. I am disappointed with the way this second chapter was written. Not cool dude.

@ BoiPussy

I agree completely!

Greatest incest story ever written! Simple as that. (and i haven't even read part 3)

The best. This is the fucking best. I haven't read a story of this quality(in smutland) since I discovered HentaiFoundry"s own incest category. I'm not sure if the quality of these stories are declining or if there's so many of them nowadays that the truly good ones are harder to find.

this story is epic! i look forward to reading all your other stories :)

How did "So help me, God" ever become "Soul help me a God"?

Made me lose my train of thought there, momentarily.

It's pretty rare that I feel a story might possibly have "too much" sex in it. You're doing an excellent job of building and sustaining the tension within this story, but (and I can't believe I'm actually asking this) would you mind using a little more "dialog" between characters? Besides the sex talk while actually fucking, that is. You've got the "screwing" dial turned to 10, but the "story itself" dial is down around 5 or 6. Maybe you could "balance" them out a little more?

man I just had to had to my statement. I want to commend you for your brilliant work and tell you I hope there is more man and I hope you don't keep me waiting so long to read more .

man this story was so hot I already read it about ten times. I really want to see him knock up all his female relatives id also like to see him dominate them all and turn the tables on them . god man thanks a lot im going to be hard for days

This story is really fantastic and hot! I would love it if he gets all the women on his side (they're the ones desperate for him afterall), then they can turn the tables on grandma

MOAR!!!!!!!

Soul help me a God if you don't give us a whole chapter on the twins. Also, the girlfriend should be summoned to the House. Awesome work!

You have the horny mom, the hot aunt, the sexy sister and the kinky cousin... and then you spend five pages on the protagonist fucking his grandma, leaving just small paragraphs for the rest. I think you hate your audience.

I won't call it plain stupid cause I repsect TheTalkMan too much! And if some people like it, good for them! Besides, his being back lets me know he's still around and will be back again!

So I could comment on it but I do NOT want to badmouth the Author - the only thing I wanna know now is when the 4th part of "Surrounded" is on!

I kinda hope that he dives head first into all this incest, and somehow takes control of all these horny whores and makes them his bitches at his beck and call.

Like every other story you've written it was great. I will Be checking everyday for part 3

well done sir well done, i've been reading your stories for years and just wanted to say they're awesome, keep going man

Have i seen so many wasted words together.

Skimmed over the extended foxy grandma tryst, but the rest was unapologetic, inappropriate carnal satire that burns like napalm through social affectations. Forget the awkward long term repercussions of wrangling five-plus inflamed females and resultant offspring bearing marks of recessive genetic traits.

This is Literotica and TheTalkMan is the master of leading up to the tipping point moment and delicious slide into depravity. I'm in awe and ahhh (with a sideplate of ewww). *****

cant wait to read the next part, glad to see you are posting again. strange that this story was in the new section but not on your author page

Wow...

Fucking amazing.