All Comments on 'The Photo Album'

Quite enjoyable! I hope the story is continued!

vulger vulger vulger!!!!

yet fucking beautiful!

continue on!!!!

VERY erotic. Perhaps a tad too long in parts but it makes for a very nice read. There is NO vulgarity here at all.

Please do not stop writing! That was awesome

Beautiful, slow build-up and lovely finish. I loved the buttons.

Your stories just get better and better. I can't wait for the next part, please don't keep us waiting very long.

Susan

So very beautifully and sensual.. truly erotic in caps...

I loved the way the author took the time to build the story. I almost felt like i was one of the ladies in the story...Awesome

That was amazing.

She complemented me on my dress as was surprised to learn that I had made it myself. It was a full length figure hugging dark red backless affair with a single strap that tied over the back of my neck. As I only have small breasts, 34A, I could get away without having to wear a bra so had no unsightly bra shadow showing. She also complimented me on my hairstyle and ..

(((((which COMPLEMENTED or COMPLIMENTED did you want to use???))))

Otherwise a delightful saga!!!! Grand writing

You must post a second chapter!

I can't wait for the next chapter!! that so amazing

Eh... Didn't really see ._. But yeah, post chapter five soon please. :D

This is what lesbian erotica should be. It's about emotion, yearning, and passion. Other than a couple of minor technical flaws, a well written and HOT story. Waiting for chapter two with baited breath. :-)

The title of my comment says it all. Very well crafted story with a perfect build up. A very enjoyable read.

I'm not a lesbian but I will say that this is a really good story. I love the sophistication between the two women, especially the more mature woman. I didn't know a woman was considered mature at 47. I thought she wasn't mature until old age though. Like in her fifties. I am not sure seeing as how I'm only 29 but anyhow, I think the woman should have been older than eighteen because that's just way too young. Anyhow, I did enjoy the elegance of the story and yes, the erotica part of it was ok.

A really good, well-told story.

Thank you

HP

i guess right after you had mentioned that her mum had taken the photos ... you lost me... there was no way i could get that out of my head, while she kept turning the pages of that photobook.

but... you never can please everyone...and your writingstyle seems to be good.

What a pleasure to read your writing again and I hope that all is well with you.

A belated Merry Christmas and I wish a very prosperous New Year to you.

Thanks

auldjon

Beautifully written, beautifully erotic. Up with the finest in the genre.

Wonderfully written and beautifully erotic. Please post the second chapter soon!!!

i wish it happened to me

I`M GETTING HOOKED WITH THIS(cinder)

Thank you for the tantalizingly slow, slow pace of this story. Just wonderful. And I was so pleased to see the words "to be continued."

With Michaelis' Miracle, this subtle piece by All Red transcends eroticism ,and is legitimate and compelling literature worthy of serious publication. I cried at Michaela's beautiful death, and can't wait for the Photo Album romance to grow.. They are wonderfully kind and intelligent if unconventional lovers who deserve each other Beside these two beautiful stories, , most literotica stories are trash.

Fabulous on every level, beautiful and erotic

Love, love, LOVE this story beautiful and sexy I am very glad youll be writting another to go along with this. Just dont include her mum in their relationship that would take away from the beauty of their love for each other in my opinion. Anyway GREAT story, keep writing:)

That was totally amazing ! Her mom need to just back away slowly and pretend she was never there .

Just can whait for for next chapter. Please Could we be advised when done .Thank you for vers Nice story

This was such a sweet, slowly built, well written, loving and romantic seduction. Mmmm.

Of course, you simply have to finish it. Romantically erotic encounters with Jo, inevitable office politics, talks with Mum (and more). Omg, is there another album? There really is soooo much for you to tell us. Please continue.

Very beautifull well written story. Not hurried wham bam thank you mam! Found myself anticipating and fanticizing of what was to come next. Being a lover of oral sex on a women I was totally intranced with the story start to finish!! Sure hope there is a follow up to this beautifull relationship. If mum gets involved I hope it is not incestuously.

Jim

Please can we have the followup. A well written well paced story. It would be a great pity to leave it hanging like this

The only thing I'm going to say is the Photo Album is worth a thousand wonderful words. Don't expect a quick fix, this story marinated your senses. It is truly a worthy read

when will you contınue pls do :) ı need to read more

OMG, that is such a beautifully crafted story. I love the way you set the stage, filled out the characters, on the dge of my seat during the slow restrained buildup, and the final passionate love. A masterpiece. I am dying for the sequel

this has just to continue...............more, Please

This was one of the absolute best stories I have read!!! This is one of my fantasies!!! Great job❤️❤️ I could feel tingles as I was reading page 3 especially!!!! Just wonderful

Wonderful story so far. I love your choice of a cross-generational love affair, and love how gentle it’s been. I’m not much for a story being just sex with no lead up, so this one has been so perfect. Thank you for sharing 🥰

Amazing story, so sad to see that there hasn't been any activity since 2012 and no part two. Seemed like a great way to kick start part 2