All Comments on 'The Photograph'

I see so many possibilities for this story. Jeremy has had 9 months of "falling in love" with Alex, but I'd like to see them begin a relationship and really get to know each other. She's warned him that she has a temper - it would be nice to see how he handles that. He's a bit of a loner it seems, so it would be nice to see how she handles that. They obviously have a very real chemistry, and to be quite frank, that's a hell of a start for a relationship!

I don't see any long term success in this relationship. Jeremy is a romantic but Alex is a strong professional woman who will tire of his infatuation. Spare Jeremy the pain of a breakup.

if extremes attract, the's definitely a nice relationship in their future. The problem will be the harmony of the ups and downs of any relationship and some possible clashes, but then again, the make-up is always interesting.G.Belgium

you have written an incredible short story. your sex scene is tasteful and attention retaining.

i did notice you made mention of 1980s, so maybe this idea will not work out, but consider a retrospective paragraph from a future time.

when he remembers the magic of the woman he had on his wall, and yes married, but sadly lost.

you fill in the details...car accident, incredibly fast cancer, even death in childbirth

she is part of his life forever, though she is no longer on this earth...

You have a gift! continue to use it

Yes please continue, if only to have another photo session... Great story... Thanks

Good with good hot sex. It doesn't need more. Check a dictionary for the difference between role and roll.

You did everything you intended.. anything more will either gild the lily or worse.. take away from what you just managed to create. Good job.

Good job well done, - just imagine any girl's reaction to seeing her photo plastered over a wall. I'd be putty in his hands! You described both of them very well and I felt I was involved in the story (happens very rarely in Literotica!). The sex writing was fairly perfunctory I felt as you were perhaps lost in the romance of the moment? Personally (as a woman) I imagined that when they 'clicked' it would be a rutting session on the sofa; doggie over the edge while both stared at the photo. You made it much more gentle, - so let's leave them there. Funnily enough it reminds me of another famous photographer (but a Sports Illustrated type) who was infatuated with one of his 'subjects'; eventually friends got them together and to date (some 29 years later) they are still happily married living in the West Country. Well done xox Sam

I am surprised at the few comments about this very well written story.

As a photographer your leading character is at the top of his craft. You are to be congratulated in your mastery of the printed word and its presentation.

Your prose proves that knowing the right words is only part of the whole, your presentation is outstanding.

...It seems that you know just as much about the art of photography as you do the art of love ;) The details in this story are what makes it believable and real. Wonderful piece!

Great writing - a story needs a begining, middle bit and an end. You managed this very effectively so does not require a sequel!

Keep up your good work!!!!!!!

This story is one of the most amazing love story one can ever read. It is one that i feel deep love for the one i love. To have that sort of passion is only felt on rare ocasions in life. So wish every couple would feel those feelings for one another. Keep up your passion for writing would love to know you and will continue reading your stories.

Thanks for sharing

Richard

richardsphotos142@gmail.com

the written word on the act of “joining” was exceptional.