by Selena_Kitt
Wow! That was a great, hot piece. I'm thinking I need to read more of your work!
A strong, original voice and great imagery. I loved the twist on the original Pied Piper story. Good idea and handled subtly enough that the twist isn't obvious. Thanks for posting the link.
You just amaze me. Talent seems to just ooze from you. I loved how this piece read. I could hear that guitar man playing as I read. He must have headed down to the crossroads...
for listing what else your story included ( interracial, lesbian, etc ) that is a very very considerate thing for a reader to do. I always get upset when I start to read something and partway through i find out that its going to be aout something that totally turns me off, if you really cater to your readers i think that listing what is in the story is one of the nicest things you can do.
And I love it more now. It's just stunning, and I'm sorry, but everytime I read it, I just get all... worked, is the only real way to put it. For some reason, I can picture it perfectly, but I always picture Gambit from the stupid X-men cartoon as the guitarist. Talk about screwy...
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