All Comments on 'The Planets'

What a wonderful concept! Very nicely done! One of the best stories I've ever read on this site!

Just lovely. I whised there were more planets... Thanks

Very well written,an erotic pleasure to read-just lovely

I loved this: such cleverly themed flash fiction, and without trying to play along to the Holst too closely you evoked the spirit in a few well-chosen words. I see this is your first here. Well, please go for more. You're a very good writer - not just the words, but the ideas and the imagery.

What a splendid idea. Congratulations - well above the normal standards for Internet stories. And THANK YOU. Freddy