All Comments on 'The Poets Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Nice!

Nice chapter cant wait for next.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
What a sweet, sweet story

Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Charming

Charming story with lovely potential.

College Prof

toddster119toddster119almost 13 years ago
Great start

I usually don't read older men/younger women, but this story was created with the maturity and moral dilemma needed to make it feel real. I look forward to seeing more out of this.

rafman188rafman188over 12 years ago
So beautiful.

Before my wife died, I used to write poems for her in cards for special occasions (birthday, Christmas, Valentine's Day etc.), so this story made me feel somewhat emotional.

Although my poetry was more than the 'Roses are red. Violets are blue....' type of rhyme, I had neither the imagination, nor the poetic talent that this author displays.

As the author says, "It's easy to be a critic...". So true. We critics should remind ourselves that it takes talent, imagination and no small amount of courage to publish a story and, in a way, to bare one's soul and deepest thoughts, with strangers.

A beautiful story, beautifully written.

5/5

DrbicDrbicover 12 years ago
Wonderful Tension Development

Loved it. Keep it rolling.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Wonderful... keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wonderful...not a strong enough word.

I am a teacher/counselor. I know this story and feel it. I am 62 and nearing the completion of what will be a 41 year career (at least). God knows you have touched me here. Keep it up PLEASE!

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