All Comments on 'The Pool'

Very well written and believable. Keep going.

Nice plot line, very enjoyable. It could use a quick pass from an editor, but it was still a solid and smooth read. Well done!

what a beautiful story, i loved how he still respected and obliviously loved his wife even tho she had passed on

Very nice. Wonderful story that was well written.. Keep up the good work

A lot of typos. You should either proof read or get an editor to look it over. The story itself was great though!!! Keep writing.

and tremendously hot.

Many compliments on this steamy, well-written, sexy, romantic story.