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by alupine

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Overall, very good

But, the description of his length is unbelievable and too extreme (must be about 2 feet long???).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
good idea

Good idea but that cock of his varies in size and is simply too big (2 feet of cock really?)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Very good

And ten inches isn't two feet.

Five stars.

texas_ironmantexas_ironmanabout 13 years ago

I can't wait to read more!

alupinealupineabout 13 years agoAuthor
Editor lyke2bite

I'd like to thank lyke2bite for being my editor on this one. He really helped me get this to a postable stage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Really liked this up until the "what the?!?" ending. You got a gift for description, keep at it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Fan-damn-tastic!!!!!! I have always wished somthing like this would happent to me,and the description was unfathomable. Keep up the good work and don't stop writing

CertainTreatCertainTreat4 days ago

After 13 years, it's still my fav.! Even created an account a few years ago to rate this 5/5

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I dabble in writing and drawing. I enjoy writing descriptive scenes, fantasy stories, interracial, and multi-somes. I post erotic drawings on HardwoodComics.blogspot.com I also post art on andyvines.deviantart.com