All Comments on 'The Pool Party'

Ignore the first comment. Still a well written descriptive story that delivers exactly what the tag line says. No surprises. I enjoyed it and hope you write more, I'm not even a fan of cuckold stories. Group stuff I enjoy but not when husband just watches guys fuck his wife stuff. But like I said, your was hot and a good read.

see that early age mental enfeeblement starts even before 50. I wonder why so many managers are older than that. it seems they just get dumber passed 50.

Probably a more realistic tale than most on Literotica. Take booze, and add nudity, etc, and stuff like this happens in real life. The narrator is old enough and wise enough to see that making a fuss wasn't the way to go, so stood back and watched her enjoy it. He got his in the end, too...

BTW: Doctors say that three out of four anonymous commentators are complete douches.

Ignore all the idiot comments you will get from the inbred anonymous commenters which hang around in the loving wives section. Keep writing.

I hope after 30 years of marriage I would get a little more out of life than that, nasty.

I like the lightness of touch and that it does not fall into cliche. The two men remain human beings and do not become caricatures. Like the ambivalence at the end - what will be her reaction in the morning?

Some readers seem to have difficulty in understanding that fantasies are not meant to be realities - despite the fact that making them as realistic as possible gives them more bite.

Keep writing.

Alcohol and camping surely does lead to some fun filled nights and days.

Enjoyed this story, too. Your style is great, easy to read. I've had the same issues with my wife - her refusing to go to nudist retreat. I can only get her to get naked with me around the house only now and then. But I know if she ever went, she'd love it like I do - there is nothing to compare to being naked with a lot of other people. And I believe very strongly her sexual interests would expand like Beth's did, in both of your stories, too!

was wearing a short white skirt it was thin so almost see through with light on it you could see clearly she was wearing a white thong and was wearing a black silk strap top no bra tot are big and perky 36e big bum she is size 14 beautiful face well we was in a pub meet a few people he we started talking to then they asked if we was going to soko (clubbing) we again half cut already we was dancing in a group I went to the toilet when I came back she was being groped I sat back and watched for a minute then went over and she was leaning on me drunk almost passing out so went outside had a smoke a guy came out said they where leaving to go to a friends house would we like to go I thought I need some more to drink and agreed got there and there was 7 guys 8 including me I put Chloe on the sofa we all went outside to smoke I could see her through a window two guys said they need toilet and one asked if I wanted a drink so I said yes and they brought out shots all out having a laugh I look over at Chloe and see the two guys are playing with Chloe rubbing her tits and one was eating her pussy so I made out I needed the toilet one guy ran in said me first to warn them I was coming got to living room they pretend to be watching tv so I went to the toilet went back out side and slowly pretended to fall asleep facing the window watching them play with my fiancé after a few minutes the rest of them went in and all started getting naked but left Chloe fully clothed and started fucking her at this point I was wanking freely as they couldn't see out as was dark but I could see in after about 2 hours they all had finished I pretended to wake up went over to Chloe they all had fallen asleep she was covered in cum her clothes face her and pussy and ass she was still passed out phoned a taxi half way home I realised I have no cash and he says can he fuck her so I said yes and he pulled up at a holiday in went round the back and it was a taxi hang out and they took turns on her there must of been 10 taxi men all pakis and when they finished our taxi guy made me lick her pussy and spit the cum on her clothes then we had to walk the rest of the way but I had to carry Chloe half way I had to stop and a guy drove passed offered a lift which I kindly accepted and when we got home I asked him in to fuck her so he did and when he left I was licking Chloe all over then fucked her was best sex ever she struggled to walk for a few days and was not happy when I told her but I didn't tell her from when we left the house she would kill me lol

The wife is too drunk to walk unassisted but somehow she's competent to make an informed choice about sex with two strangers? Nope, the blow job and fuck were chargeable acts of sexual assault.

Rape is neither entertaining nor erotic.