All Comments on 'The Postman Cums Twice Ch. 1'

by Wyden Long

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flirtz2002flirtz2002about 18 years ago
Not believable!

This chapter is not believable at all. It's horrible. I can't even give any constructive criticism about what to fix because it's ALL awful!

For those who are thinking about reading the remaining chapters, it only gets worse!

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