All Comments on 'The Power'

What the fuck? That's it? Not even a hint? The most erotic part of the chapter was the nurse! Try adding MORE to future chapters so readers are not as disappointed as I was. Also, make sure that we all know what the fuck is going on; the descriptions were excellent, but we still come up really goddamn short. I give this a 'meh'.

Seems like an OK plot idea for a scifi story. I found aspects of the writing a bit strange, for example a 6 foot tall nurse described as petite. Still I am interested in where the story goes. -- UK CYNIC

Good introduction. I can't wait till you reveal the sexual nature of the power.

Curiously, it feels like a dead end without the dead part. This bodes ill . . . Ron