All Comments on 'The Power of a Submissive'

I resent being tricked into reading Group Sex which I dislike intensely.

Tagging can be tricky, but the group aspect should have been listed. That said, tags are listed after the story, so not always helpful. If your story crosses actual categories, not just kinks within a group, it is helpful to write a brief author note at the start mentioning the other issues. Most readers have a few categories they read and many they won't due to personal squicks.

Now. I like your writing style. You do a good female voice for being a guy. Cudos. This group scene demonstated more care, concern and valueing of the sub than the majority of one-on-one supposedly loving D/s scenes which have been presented lately. This is a good demonstration of a power exchange relationship actually having an exchange-something is given in BOTH directions...not another in the parade on one way streets.

I look forward to more from you.

I've been notified that some people are upset by Group Sex being included without them being made very aware of it beforehand, so I'm letting you know now.