All Comments on 'The Power of Words on a Mind'

Hello,

thanks for that good story. I liked the romantic mood in combination with the mc setting that you have created in this one quite a lot. Would you please consider writing more parts/a continuation?

Sir has them down pat.

My first mind control story. Wasn’t too bad, but not at the top of my likes. 4 stars.

Bill S.

Far too many exclamation marks! Not every sentence while he had her in a trance needed it! It really wasn't necessary! You could have gotten away with just using a period! Unless he was really talking like James T. Kirk. And, 'special cock'? Seriously? This implies he has a non-special cock he uses for everyday occasions.