All Comments on 'The Powerless'

Grammatically correct, only a couple typos, good set-up, nice rhythm but... so... many... clichés! ARGH! Lol, it's good, but it could be oh-so-better without the cringe-worthy clichés.

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Powerless and since she let an ass-hat defile her first she is worthless. I think keen should fuck her a couple more times and tell the stupid slut to go back to letting asshole douchebags fuck her and walkout and ignore her while he us fucking other girls who appreciate him.