All Comments on 'The Pretender'

Nice start. Can't wait for more. Thanks for your writing.

Wonderful story and I can't wait for chapter two. And last but not least, Thanks:)

For a first story it was really good! I'm looking forward to the second chapter.

<smile> what a nice beginning.... Please hurry with the next installment!

there will be sexy scenes in the next chapter too!

This is shaping up to be really interesting! Well done!

that this is the start of a well written series and It's a pleasure to see that 3 chapters have already been posted. A 5 star beginning.

this is rather good.?

One of my favorites as far as classic oldies go, and a great way to begin your series. Liking this so far.

I think this is going to be a great series.

You made me all teary eyed at work!

Good work so far.

Been a long while since this Author received some love! All three stories are fantastic but can be a bit confusing to follow. My recommendation? Read all of "Help Me", move on to "The Pretender" and read through Ch. 08. That's the time to start reading "The Fighter". Truthfully, that one ends abruptly but I wasn't disappointed. There's an Epilogue to "The Pretender" that isn't linked and is short and sweet. I sincerely hope this Author starts to share their talent again one day as I've discovered these stories in 2021, long after they were written. JaycobMatthews: BRAVO,