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All Comments on 'The Pretender Ch. 12'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
WHAT !!!!

THE END , well that just sux I really loved this story the slow build up and the whole relationship BEAUTIFUL , cant wait to read more of Ben and James' story

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avidreadravidreadralmost 11 years ago

Beautiful ending, Thank you for a lovely story.

canndcanndalmost 11 years ago

I really enjoyed following this couple on their journey. I think the ending was done well and was sweet. It came to a close at a good pace for me. I'm also enjoying The Figher....so keep it coming!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Loved it

I read a lot of stories/books and this is by far the best.

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