All Comments on 'The Price'

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juanjsojrjuanjsojrover 19 years ago
good story

good story between mother and son after seeing each other for the first time in years it was good

arulvelkarulvelkabout 16 years ago
nice story.....

yeah..the story was nicely narrated with all details clear and the feelings of bothe the mother and the son....i read it with delight and it really turned me on but towards the end it felt like as if the author really needed to end the story as soon as possible...i think he could have continued with more and sensual and sexual encounter between the mother and her son..anyways..nice story....thsnx

oldwayneoldwaynealmost 15 years ago
Good tale,

Although I'm not usually interested in Mother/Son tales, this one was very well written and deserved the highest of scores. Thank you for a good tale.

YamiBoyYamiBoyover 13 years ago
^__^

Nice story. Great work, thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

what a traitorous whore.

toby9790toby9790over 11 years ago
You ruined a Good Story!

That whore, she should have figured out another way to get the visa. She didn't even end up telling him the truth. You have ruined what could have been a very good, and loving story. You made the mother into a fucking whore. Shame on you.

LAROCLAROCover 11 years ago
It's like a great story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The story of lost and found.The story starts with a child taken from it's mother just after birth.Then 18 years later, she gets a phone call, and guess who's on the other end.HI I THINK I'AM YOUR SON. It's a very good read ,well written and though out.If you like happy endings, this is the story to read... .......LAROC OF AGES

grabmyballsgrabmyballsabout 8 years ago
Nice People, Mostly

I hated the sex in a hotel with a bureaucrat in exchange for some papers. Otherwise, I loved this story. That one part seems so untrue to who she is.

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