All Comments on 'The Princess'

This could've been considered Romance up until the point of him needing to have multiple wives.

Put this under erotic couplings or group sex not Romance.

Some guy having multiple wives is more crap than romance.

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that didn't quite fulfill the promise. The details of the two were not enough to have me care about them as a couple. The introduction of multiple wives was too sudden, not for her (she was raised knowing it was coming) but for him. Being something more than a sperm donor is hard work requiring lots of communication savvy and care and none of that was in the story.

Additionally, there were spelling mistakes at critical moments that distracted from the flow of the story.

It was okay until the multiple wives part. How is that romance?

Now having said that I suppose all the wives are pregnant with boys!

When he settles in and realizes how many wives he has that are going to be chewing on him from time-to-time I think he'll come to understand that his little

"heaven" is, in reality, a nightmare.

So little time. Funny story. But I'm thinking that this is one of those "be careful what you ask for" type of stories. SO many women to bite your head off.

Worst story ever, I can't imagine sitting through the pain of reading another of your stories

This is a light hearted enjoyable story to read.

What a wonderful story of love and lust.

Far out man! He hit the Grandmother of all Jackpots! Shoot he gets more pussy than the animal refuge does in a year! Far East man! I want what hes got

Thanks for sharing this Fantastic story with us! ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF

Daft plot: pedestrian prose.

Could use more character build up. Different kind of fantasy. All good.

Your story is worse than Eddie Murphy's "Coming to America"

10 wives ... shit the bed bro, no f in way

Just sister invited, no parents no best man no friends NO state wedding

The king says "your going to fuck my daughter but dont get her preggers" 🤪🤪😂😂

Everything about this story is SHITE ....

The conclusion i find is this load of tripe is so immature im guessing its written by an adolescent.

The writer is in a small bubble and needs it popping so he or she may grow up !!

... I give 1* only ...

The plot is not bad for a porn movie. I mean, it's definitely not worse than "Oh, what are you doing, step-brother while I'm stuck in the washing mashine."