All Comments on 'The Princess and the Protector'

Please keep writing, great story and characters. I usually skip stories in this section, I am glad I found this one.

This story is awesome it has the potential to be a full blown novel with 7-8 more chapters please continue it and give it a happy ending

More.. i can feel a few more in u for this couple..but not to many..but a few is just enough for this story

I would continue reading if there were to be more to read

Very good start,This could be a very good,novel length story

This is excellent. It is the style and type of story than can easily be a multistory series with many twists and turns. Great work!

I want more!!

Please add more I want to read more

feel free to add another dozen chapters or so...

I really enjoyed this start and the characters. i am intrigued how they might escape the expected traditions and make their life together while gaining her rightful position on the throne...I hope you have a plan and I'd love to hear it!

Thanx for this well written and arousing story. My vote is for more.

It was a great read but I did feel like I had come in half way through the story. I would love not only to see where they go from there, but also the build up to this moment. You reference how they've kissed once before and the brief unguarded moments between them and how hard it must have been for him to witness her taking lovers in the past. Also the relationship the princess has with her brother and the pressure she feels to make a political marriage. I think if you covered their back story and allowed the sexual tension and pressure to simmer for a bit then you'd have the potential to turn this into one of the best story series on the site. Well done, hope to see more of you!

This was really well written and a great story. I would love more but the only thing is that you boxed yourself for a prequel but there are so many things you can do for forward chapters.

Love this story, wouldn't mind reading another

Hello everyone- just thought I would say a quick thanks for all the comments and ratings. I am truly overwhelmed and extremely flattered by the responses.

I have decided to go back a little further and plan to write two chapters that will be set before this one so that I can set up the characters and the world a little better before I explore what will happen after this event.

Thank you all so much the the amazing support :)

Thanks SS. Beautifully written and so very erotic. There must be another to follow, surely. Please .... ;)

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this as I have with all your stories :) you write very well and I like the characters you invent :)

Hope you continue. This was a wonderful read and the build-up was fantastic.

Thanks so much for your comment. I am really happy with this story, the problem is writing a beginning that will do this justice. I have been working on it for a while but have not created anything I am yet content with. I am hoping that inspiration strikes me down soon, because I would love to explore Liliene and Perin the way they deserve to be explored!

Thanks again :)

Great story! I absolutely loved it. Write more, I feel that it has the potential for several sequels as well as prequels. Great job SS.

I really would like to see things an actual story... In three pages you already hve me invested in te characters, wondering what the Eastern prince is like, and hating the brother of Liliene... You should write sword and board fantasy. Please let us know when you write more

This was the start of a wondrous tale and I eagerly await the rest of it.

It does beg for more. Well written.

Can't wait to read about the trip in the smuggling ship, who she marries or how they got to where they are

Please do write more and thanks for sharing! Amazing story!