by Aurora Leigh
I would to thank you for writing this as its well constructed and the narrative follows from start to finish. You have a rare talent on this site for writing realism which I can say is a breath of fresh air as most stories feel like they have been written by 5th grader's with there eyes closed.
I have one thing to tell you don't let negative feedback stop you as you write better than any ''shades of grey'' book could ever
i can't tell you how appreciative i am that you took the time to comment on my work - it's the only payment a writer on lit receives & i am grateful that you took the time to do so. it is inspiration enough to continue on with the story of Leo & Ellie. and just for the record, i have never cracked "50 shades of whatever" but i have never felt the pull to do so because well, 1) there are plenty of amazing writers on this site that keep me intrigued & b) my own imagination leaves me satisfied most of the time :) Thank you again !