by Kayayay
There are so many questions and possibilities of what could happen in this story that I am excited for it. Please keep going. If you need an editor I would love to help. Keep it coming!!!
you need to get an proof read and help with promblems....with english not being your first language more then less..but good start...
I can't wait to see where this story is going to go. I'm curious to see what happened to everyone
Great start. Can't wait to read more.
Found all the hyphenated words a bit odd though.