All Comments on 'The Prophecy Ch. 01'

by Kayayay

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XxEarBudsxXXxEarBudsxXover 10 years ago
Love it!!

There are so many questions and possibilities of what could happen in this story that I am excited for it. Please keep going. If you need an editor I would love to help. Keep it coming!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
good start

you need to get an proof read and help with promblems....with english not being your first language more then less..but good start...

MsTaylorMsTaylorover 10 years ago
great start

I can't wait to see where this story is going to go. I'm curious to see what happened to everyone

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Awesome!!!

I love it!!! You are a great writer!!! Keep it up!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Amazing start

I would love to read more of your stories. Keep them coming!

KittybalooKittybalooover 10 years ago

Great start. Can't wait to read more.

Found all the hyphenated words a bit odd though.

transrmutransrmuover 10 years ago
love it

cant wait for the next chapter :)

cindyp1976cindyp1976over 4 years ago
Really good

This story was really good why haven't you written more

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