All Comments on 'The Purple Dress'

PicturePainter. Your writing is fine. Please ignore the anonymous comments. I thought it was pretty good. Most stories can use some editing, sure, but essentially your story was well written in my opinion.

I loved this story as the narrator/slut slowly told her story of her gang bang in a slow build up that was very sexual! Very disciplined writing style that was both appealing and clever. Well done!

wrong category

Crap story considering the catagory you selected. GREAT story in the Fetish catagory. But here total Crap

I enjoy her recanting what had happened. I think you could have drawn it out a bit more and stuck this in another category. Good attempt.

It sucked!

It certainly wouldn't make any difference to her boy friend if she fucked the whole group of them, so what's the point.

She is definitely a major slut, and could be a good whore if her boy friend would put her to work on the street.

Last time I went into the wrong room, intending to go to a book club discussion, it was a crochet meeting - no one under 76! Next time I'll turn left!

I am eager to suspend belief when reading fiction (except sci-fi) but usually only one big point or maybe three small points. This story was FIVE big points.

So it gets 3*

One sick excuse for a story.

but thankfully didnt take a lot of time. I thought she was gonna service the room, but it was simply a relaying of past debaucheries tot he group.

A confession by a wife leads to more than she expects

Well for one thing if it excited you it lead you to realize you're most likely gay and in denial

And the other thing it would lead to, if the MC was actually a self respecting man, would be a divorce, hell even if the first thing were correct (it most likely is as studies dont lie) that too would lead to a divorce.

So logically a divorce is the only thing this shitty story would lead to.

What a happy little ending.