All Comments on 'The Queen of Sambia'

Ooohh! More Please!!

A great story so far, but what happens next? I'm just dying to know! Please write the next chapter soon!

Keep writing, it isn't often you get a good story with a variety of characters and creatures.

Loved the story and the way u developed it... But I do have a Q... how on earth did the Lian land up in what is obviously a men's prison? Looking forward to reading the rest of the story!

LOVED the story!!!!! Please continue. Have never had a story on this site keep me so involved and interested!!

I dont often see a story this appealing written by a guy. I look forward to more of your writing.

Wow this is an awesome story, finding a story this good is a rare treat... write more!

I loved this story. At the beginning I was kind of skeptical about reading through it but when I started reading more and more, I couldn't close it until I finished all 3 pages.

I can't wait to see more on this story!

I loved this story. At the beginning I was kind of skeptical about reading through it but when I started reading more and more, I couldn't close it until I finished all 3 pages.

I can't wait to see more on this story!

I NEVER GIVE FEEDBACK, but on this occassion I feel it is warranted. I have read literally thousands of stories on this site over the years and none has moved me like this one has. This is my favorite category, and you have done this genre much credit. Please write more, since I have a sense that there is more to Lian's story. Keep up the good work.

Jezeble

I absolutely loved this story. I want to see more done to explore this relationship between the King and the Lian.

A well written story. I loved reading it. I am hopeing that you will write more on this story.

cant wait for more with these two.

I hope you expand on this story! It was great.

Absolutely wonderful story, great cliffhanger, but needs to be continued.... SOON!

I hope you write more on this... give me another installment please.

I can't wait to find out what happens next..it's a great story one of the best..need more.......

This story is very good. Please give us more!

I don't leave comments for numerous reasons but this was a great story with an odd story line that created a great plot and great in depth characters!

I hope you finish it.

I know usually on here, a somewhat open ending like this one means sequals should be following. But I love the ending to this story. It's great as a short story. The only issue I really have is how she ended up on a men's prison. I'd love to see the back story included in this one. But I LOVED the ending. It has a truly literary quality to it that I love; and it feels like the right kind of ending. However, I would also love to see the story continued and developed. I think it could be an amazing longer story, too.

U NEED to write more.this is so good...omg

This was such a good read !!!

Please write queen if sambia 2 . It was soooo good and would love it if they met the other kings or lian got pregrant