by MistressKaren
Really well written - perhaps a bit more of the erotic elements would make it even more HOT
Now i'm totally not into the whole femdom>male strapon thing and even knowing where this story was headed i read on. You write well and i encourage you to write some F+F strapon action set in this period. I'm not big on period stories either but again your writing kept me interested in the story rather than the sex (doesn't happen often). At any rate keep it up!
Is that what the kids are calling it these days? Not my cup of tea but still creative and intelligent. (Not your typical Penthouse Forum drivel). Reminds me of something I once read by Anne Rice in the 1990's. Good job!