by Callidora
Ok, that would have been a straight up 100, if not for the continuous missed comma. Having said that, the story was fantastic, absolutely overwhelming. Good job
Loved the dreamy quality and the tone and the pacing. It seemed real and fantastic at the same time.
When i go through looking for stories i generally look at above 4.7, but this was a 4.5? This is beautifully written, with correct grammar and spelling, the sensations are artistically described with reality. This is freaking amazing!