All Comments on 'The Red Bracelet'

by MrIllusion

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
absolutly the best

I've read in a long time. Just continue like that. keep uf those illusions, mr. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wow..

Thats all I can really say.

It's different.

I love it!!

It started out as though we were never going to get to the good sexual parts, but that just made it soo much better!

Good Job! :]

Favorite story on this site so far!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
no ground inside a house its call a flood

great story

PrinzmettlePrinzmettleabout 6 years ago
Just beautiful!

Thank you for another beautiful story. The pacing is excellent; it kept leading me along and insisting that I wanted to know more.

You have mentioned that others have issues with your English. My assumption is that your "native" language is French, based on such things as making "hair" plural instead of singular. And there are some idioms that you express differently. But this is part of your charm and my enjoyment.

Great writing. Please keep it up!

KelteriserKelteriserabout 6 years ago
Wonderful

I am slowly working my way through your library of work - I haven't read a bad one yet!

You can tell a story very well - keep it up

Loved this story

bosombuddiesbosombuddiesover 4 years ago
Really sexy

I’ve read this story a couple times now and keeps getting better. Maybe it’s just my own personal bias but I love stories about friends who become something more — especially when one of those friends is a beautiful, big breasted seductress. Between this and the Midsummer series, I think it’s safe to say I’m a fan!

G5902G5902almost 3 years ago

Again, I have read and thoroughly enjoyed this story!!!! This is a fantastic story — thank you for sharing!

BruceS1949BruceS1949about 2 months ago

Wonderful story. I love it.

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