All Comments on 'The Reluctant Psychic Ch. 04'

I enjoyed reading this story a lot! I hope,there will be more additions to it! :)

You keep leading us on with little subtle hints of a deeper story behind this mystery man and his lovely family. Please keep up the excellent work as I am having a lack of patience about this story. Thanks

I'm really enjoying the flashbacks to 'how I became what I am' and the intersections of the present. Charming, delightful and cheery.

Well done.

Liked it so far. But the flasbacks seem untidy at times, and several times I had too read a section multiple times to get a meaning out of it. Some changes of scenes seemed to hasty, and I lost track of paste and present a couple of times. Some tidying at those section would make the chapter better and more stable. The chapter in itself was interesting, just a bit confusing to read at times.

I only wish there was more of it.

Way back asswards. I'm sorry but I'm gonna have to stop reading this story due to it giving me a migraine. I don't see the sense in starting a story from the end.

This was great, i just dont remember you writing how banmi saved his life in the flashbacks, idk maybe i missed something i read fast....

At last you are making sense of this covuluted story