All Comments on 'The Reunion'

I hate these "you" stories. They really are a lazy way to write. You're speaking to your character instead of the reader. Quit it and you might end up with a good one.

..that it was an excerpt. The character was describing an erotic dream to someone. My fault "Anonymous" for not providing YOU with everything YOU needed to get out of it what YOU wanted. Lol. I'm not here for accolades...just sharing. Thanks.