All Comments on 'The Rich and The Famous Ch. 02'

by SexyX

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Too Many Words

Too many words for so little plot (and it is not the lack of sex that is the reason). Tighten up your script and make the plot easier to understand.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Too many words?

Sounds like that line in "Amodeus" where Mozart is told his music has "too many notes".

This story reads like you know a bit about the acting business.

6King6King4 months ago

Waste of space.

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