All Comments on 'The Ring'

Loved it. Susan having herself pierced with the engraved ring marking herself as belonging to Val is the ultimate act of submission. It was a very emotional moment.

Mistress You write amazing stories,thank You for sharing them

Read all of your stories so wonderful. Goodness where can I find that kind of Mistress to devote to, so jealous lol. Simplely amazing and beautifully writen

Very hot! Please more!

I only wish you had found an editor for this story to catch all the spelling errors etc. Hopefully you will do a second part for this story and her mistress can have her labia pierced several times on each side. By inserting a vibrator or something and locking her closed then teased relentlessly at work and forced to climax in public. Perhaps even at a night club while dancing with strangers. check out lofwyrkp wrote a story called Friday night

Thank you for an excellent story.

Although there is little characterization it is not needed in this story, but there is loads of the slaves emotions. One almost think they were the slave. i particularly liked the love that exists between slave and Mistress.

Please do write more about these two, especially about taking and collaring the slave.

that got me thinking...please tell us more about these two lovers.thanks.

Really enjoying your stories, I hope there are more to come

More Please Mistress!

Simply exquisite