All Comments on 'The Rings'

Mmmmmm dream come true

that this was just a start....lots of threads left to weave!

You make want more...

I wish something like this existed I would pay anything

Pleaseee continue this story!

A very well thought out and written story so far. I thoroughly enjoyed it and am looking forward to its continuation.

A good reading that flows well. I am anxious to read what is to come !

The only downside of this story, is the lack of a second chapter. I hope you'll add one soon :)

It could get more interesting if the mom does the rings the reverse of what the boy does. The necklace is also a variable in this story of the grass being greener on the other side of the ring!

Why did you stop?