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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Thanks for coming back ...

... and don't rush it too much. I couldn't believe your posts go back to 2009.

I can't say I remembered all of this saga, but the actors fell rapidly back into place - isn't that the sign of a well wirtten story ?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
*****

Hope you come back to this story.. It's absolutely excellent

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I NEVER leave a comment even on the serialized stories that I am still waiting for authors to finish up on... But you must! I thoroughly enjoy the plotline, character developments, action scenes... everything is excellent! If this was a published novella (or developed into a full blown novel.. a series?!), I would totally be enamored by it. Might have the tone those steamy scenes for the general masses lol, but then again... It might not be the same (especially crucial in some of the plot changes! Keep it up! And hopefully it won't be another 6mths before the next chapter?!?

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