All Comments on 'The River'

The way you write with expression of your thoughts is great. Have read a few of your other stories and they are great as well.

Great thoughts. Great mind. Would still make that trade... :-)

Boston

I am reading the stories by submission dates, and this one is hot. almost to life like, you think ? : )

Looking forward to the rest, and keep them cumming.

You captured so many fine details in your story, that it was very real to me. You developed the personality of the boyfriend and the girlfriend's feelings extremely well. And then there are the sex scenes...well I am a bit on the wet side.

That story is SO hot. I'll be fantasizing about being naked with you and skinny dipping. Then dipping my rigid cock into your wanton pussy! DAMN! Thanks for sharing your story. Sure wish I had some stories like that from my college days... (boo hoo!)

first anal experience and of course tequila was involved lol, ill tell ya girly your just climbing the ladder on my fun loving sexuality scale :).

My wife loved your story and than she told me that she was fertile and that she was having a gang bang that night which she got pregnant from.

I reckon he's blown it, whilst Jenn's blowing his pals.

You really know how to paint a vivid picture! Must me the artist in you. Of course I wish that it was me that was in you.

Jennifer, I really liked how the piece built, my favorite time in a story is the temptation just before someone finally gets irreversibly turned on by something and the barriers to doing what he/she wants come down.

Also, well gosh it just hit a fantasy of mine too. I hope sometime you'll consider follow-up pieces to show us if the relationship between Jenn and the room mates continued or not. I presume the abuse-shouting boyfriend is out?

Thanks for sharing.

I loved it! And wished that I could have been part of it.

Great story telling!

A buddy of mine went to the 50th in Chicago over the 4th. He got to see all three shows. I couldn't afford it. From what he says it was a heck of a PARTY. He went with two girls. He was a Dead Head since '74. I go back to '67. Sorry I missed it.

Lust filled afternoons are not about tenderness and care, they are about raw animalistic sex yet, Brian and Steve seemed to show more love and care for Jenny than that abusive prick Alan was made out to show in their whole relationship. Good for her and I hope he sees the pictures once he's say at home playing Billy no mates.

It's a testament to your writing that you can evoke positive and negative emotions for the protagonists and antagonists. The sex is hot and the picture is full of vivid colours. Looking forward to the next story (I'm reading them in date order - which has thrown me as Bob was Jenny's BF in the previous).

I hope Allan had a lonely day and has a lonely life.

You are heads and tails above all other writers. Pure gold and I love your stories. Lord how I wish you were still active but blessed to still have your work to admire.

I could only imagine what it would be like for a lady to have 2 nice cocks to fuck. That was a great slut story 10 Stars

That was an awesome story! Thank you

excellent. Alan deserved this

I only rated this story a"5" because "10" was not available. Jennifer01 is a great author.

Jennifer you are Amazing i’ve read your stories time and time again over the years. I haven’t been to this site in quite some time and came straight to look you up. Wow, just wow. I have to re register so I can send you an email Sooo Hot !!!