All Comments on 'The Roommate'

by blacksheep20

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marklionmarklionover 15 years ago
Great Start

That was a great start to the story. I hope that there will be more chapters to the story. Would like to see the characters develop a relationship in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great story

This is a great story! Very hot!

skywriterxxxskywriterxxxover 15 years ago
you're kidding!

This is your only story? Dang, it's so good, I thought you were a prolific writer! Very well done. I would personally prefer a bit more 'dialog', getting to know you type stuff, and some more extensive character development, but this is great for a 'quickie'. Looking forward to more of your work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Oh my gosh!!!

Fricking HOT. Got me so wet. You have to do more. You write exactly what I like to hear.

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