All Comments on 'The Sacrifice'

I really liked your story, hope to see more of your work here!

An unusual, beautiful story. It manages to be happy and sad at the same time. I would like to see more of your work.

ts nice to read new story of author from my city.

Looking forward to read another from you.

and anyway its my kinda cocktail *cheers*

You kept the story simple, yet there were a lot of layers to the characters. Nice job.

Wow, that was really one of the best. I loved it. Very emotional.

Thank you, guys and gals, for the lovely comments. I'm smiling from ear to ear reading the nice feedbacks from all of you.

Like I said, this is my first attempt to write something for Lit although I've been reading the site since I'm in high-school, which is years ago. So it's really good to know that my story is appreciated.

English is not my first language so I did have some problems at first, particularly in the use of tenses etc. I thanked Ken Nitsua for kindly helping me corrected the mistakes in the first draft.

At first, I thought the story was a little bit short but then again I wanted to keep it simple and decided to leave it as it is.

Thank you, thank you and thank you. Hopefully I can submit more stories in near future. I'm juggling between writing fiction at nights and reporting at days. But I'm sure I can make it happen.

I love you all!

Exactly well done and will enjoy reading more in the future

But hate Remy and Lukas. What horrible people.

what selfish assholes

Remy does not deserve to be happy