All Comments on 'The Sapphic Pirate Miranda Pt. 02'

You're maintaining the excellence of 18th century prose (or something that very decently approximates to it!). You're driving a good story along at a cracking pace!

I'm a little bit worried about the 'lashes' punishment that our lovely little heroine is due to receive in episode 3, but I can think of all sorts of alternative punishments she might (oh, so willingly!) agree to!

You're good! Very good! Hate to say it, but it might be worth your while to stop publishing this story on a public site! Keep it to yourself until you've developed it to novel length, then put it to an erotic fiction publisher. This is worth money!