by ChristineDAngelo
From what I've seen so far, I think that you are a wonderful writer. I loved this story and I think that it has a lot of potential for future chapters. I can't wait to see what's next. And may I say, in a personal note, I especially like your choice of character name :)
Hopefully A Future Friend,
Becca :)
This was a great start. It exudes sensuality as well as sexuality. I'm on edge for the next chapter.
Good writing and a great subject ;) can't wait to read the next chapter xxx