All Comments on 'The Screamer Ch. 08'

by Liquor69

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mstrchef13mstrchef13over 12 years ago
Losing your way

I loved the first few in the series because the sex and the story were balanced. I wasn't happy when you tried to turn everyone into drug fiends a few chapters back, and lately I think the balance between story and sex has been lost. There has been so much sex between so many people all the time that I find myself skimming through the sex scenes looking for some plot to tie it all together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
too many characters

there are so many characters i dont care about and like the other person says "plot? what plot?"

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